by Alix Owen
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19 April 2025
“Too much philosophising and not enough plot” ★ ½ Dick. introduces us to a group of Gen Z friends at a 26th birthday party. They're leaving their mid-twenties, real adulthood beckons, hidden loves and old friendships tangle in amongst them. The flagship scene of the first act comes when they've returned home from clubbing and begin one of those slightly slurring deep-and-meaningfuls that tend to happen in the melancholy early hours after a night out. They discuss sex and love, connection and fulfilment, what it all means as they find themselves settling firmly into their adulthood now that they're officially closer to 50 than 0. The five distinct characters each present something to which we can all relate, a viewpoint, outlook, sensibility. They open up about their most intimate experiences, their wants and desires. It's snappy, funny, and intelligent. For me, here is the heart and core of the play. This is the story, character-driven and thoughtful, their interactions and observations. But soon after this opening, it starts to become overly verbose and lacking in substance, relying thinly on the trope of young people lamenting the lost youth they still have. That in and of itself is not enough to sustain a two-hour runtime. Some stories are introduced though. At the very start an unspoken love story between River (Max Brennan) and Ruby (Frederick Russell) does crackle with chemistry, but is quickly forgotten in favour of some other tenuous take on boredom and hedonism and misery, which is strange as the characters don't appear to have any jobs or money worries or family, or anything really. This gives the play a random and meandering feel as they move through the course of what appears to be a year, with characters appearing here, there, and everywhere to chat a load of nonsense. So what starts as a promising and on-trend deep dive into sex and relationships à la Sally Rooney becomes, appropriately, a hot mess. But a smart one nonetheless. The main problem is that it is excruciatingly slow. Bravely long pauses become too long and too overused, giving whole exchanges a dull flatness and tonal stasis as they have the same revelations time and again. I stress that these kind of pauses and silences are brave and can work incredibly well. One particular example, when an entire scene between River (Brennan) and Ruby (Russell) is performed without a single word, so much said with so little, is truly commendable, touchingly acted too. But too much of this with no modulation in mood is a recipe for monotony. Scenes end up repetitive and circular, with the same characters saying the same thing over and over again in different ways, and different characters saying those same things again, over and over again, in the same way, differently. Though I'm not entirely sure what it is they're saying. Writer/Director Adam Kinneen is clearly talented, but it is in need of serious cutting – because the effect of all this is that there is no variety in tone or pace at all. It’s like it’s been written with being clever in mind, not an audience’s time in mind, which is ironic given the admittedly nice monologue at the start describing the truly erotic part in the long lead-up to sex as “f***ing someone’s time”. So what we have then is the same point – whatever that is – being hammered home from start to finish, almost undermining an audience’s intelligence. Now, this might just be because there simply isn't enough weight and volume to stretch over its two-hour runtime. The first twenty minutes is where this play is at. It's strong and sizzling. There is real potential here though, as what we have is an interesting, if underdeveloped, set of modern characters, who, actually, you could see having these kind of deep, slightly drunken exchanges as they did at the start in a series of 20-minute episodes on screen instead. I'd be curious to see what these people make of a range of subjects. And as an overall show, it's really well produced. The company’s marketing materials are cool; the set, light, and sound design is all great; and the performances are strong and professional. The content though could do with some reshaping. As it is, there's too much philosophising and not enough plot, too much time given to trying to be profound; ultimately missing what could be some interesting socio-political points about why these young people feel such apathy in their lives. Dick. promises to not waste a second saying what it means, though it appears to take a long time to get there. It tells us it's a play about needing more from everything, but I think it'll be on to a winner if it gives us a little less Dick. and a little more drama. Photography: Abigail Dawn. DICK. Written & Directed by Adam Kinneen Presented by Next to Nothing Productions, in co-production with Drayton Arms Theatre Drayton Arms Theatre, 15 – 26 April 2025 Box Office: https://www.thedraytonarmstheatre.co.uk/dick-2 Reviewed by Alix Owen